Life
- hashtagkalakar
- Jan 11
- 1 min read
Updated: Jan 17
By Sriram
Relishing to a point of certainty, to
An age of scrutiny with an undeveloped creed of
Of the modern world has forsaken the reality of the past, future and
Rightly so the present. Fazed and dazed as you might say, but just-
Stay glazed in the monopoly of this society.
This further brings me back to the good old question of
“Who am I?”
It just sizzles past your mind for philanthropic reasons, Ageing my friend!
Alas, it has revolutionised the procrastinator, an accusatory author!
But has it for a contemporary teenager?
This just dilutes the contradiction of a certain influence of social media,
Craven hell! What happened to your so-called friends?
It just fizzes to the fact that happiness is missing you badly,
Merely does anyone think about the effects of these monsters rather than-
Your beloved ones, stay true to them.
The phase of soul is about finding the right state of selflessness,
Hatred makes the obvious into a reality,
It’s you the lost piece of the puzzle.
By Sriram
Well done by Sriram. It reveals his poetical and philosophical mind. His vocabulary also exemplary. Congratulations.
I got Sriram ' s thoughts simplified by using modern technology.
Please find below the same.
This passage is about the struggles of modern life, particularly for teenagers, and the search for identity and happiness. Here's a simplified breakdown:
* The Problem: The modern world is fast-paced and confusing. It feels like we've lost touch with the past and future, and even the present is hard to grasp. This creates a sense of being lost and disoriented.
* The Question: This feeling leads to the age-old question, "Who am I?" This question is especially pressing for young people.
* The Irony: While we ha…
An unique perspective- Pavan
A beautifully introspective piece, Sriram! Your words eloquently capture the struggles of modern life, identity, and the search for meaning. The metaphor of the "lost piece of the puzzle" is especially striking—thoughtful and impactful!
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Great poem!