Asked Me Once
- hashtagkalakar
- Jan 9
- 1 min read
Updated: Jan 17
By Joyal Gupta
If you just asked me once,
I would have stayed.
Only if you chose to hold my hand,
But you never made that mistake.
I believe when they say-
You can't feel love,
If you haven't once been betrayed.
The days when I seethed in storms,
Aren't the ones I hate.
I have seen worse,
But honey, it hurts to get betrayed.
By Joyal Gupta
in love with your word theory...how you create a web of words and weave a beautiful story out of sorrow and betrayal
This is beautifully written, The vulnerability and raw emotions in your words make it so impactful. Keep it up!
The emotional depth and vulnerability in your poetry are inspiring, encouraging me to explore my own emotions.
Relatable to many people those who fall in love
Beautiful poetry