By Mitushi Bhatt
She laughed loudly into the phone speaker, the world seemed to fade away whenever he
talked.
"What's that horrible screeching sound, are you on the road?" He asked.
"Yeah, I'm crossing over- "
The phone clattered to the ground, " Maria? Maria!"
But the line was dead.
By Mitushi Bhatt
1) Suspenseful
2) Socially Relevant
3) Parsimonious The mark of great writing! 😊 Keep going, Mitushi. 🎓
So much conveyed in so few lines !!
Feelings and emotions portrayed well... loved it. Small yet Meaningful👏🏻
Holy cow !!