Awake
- hashtagkalakar
- Jul 17, 2023
- 1 min read
Updated: Apr 10, 2024
By M Santosh Kumar
A journey through the clouds; In a deep sleep; Dreams with pleasure and pain; Half awake at times; Yet the sleep continues…
Aircraft as the body; Engine as the mind; Pilot as the cosmic intelligence; Traveler as the soul; Entrapped inside the aerospace…
A no non-transient travel; Destination arrives; Casting off the airship; Unloading the engine; Rejuvenating at waiting lounge…
Next aircraft appears; Engine gets loaded; Pilot awaits, traveler boards; Journey to new destination; Entirely different co-passengers…
Getting off half way through, feasible? Shifting to another airplane, attainable? Swapping the engine, achievable? Changing the destination or path, imaginable? Temporal journey continues…
Puppetry happening since ages; AWAKE!!!
Illusion of endless loop essential?
Still asleep, O traveler…
Awake awake, O soul…
By M Santosh Kumar
This poem's brilliant use of metaphors not only on its theme in a transcendent form but also leaves an impression on its readers. Keep writing Santosh.
Such a profound concept! The analogy is fascinating 👌
Very insightful and interesting way this poem has turned out to be, with great analogy in context. Thank you for this work.
Wow, very deep and insightful poem Santosh.
Hope to see more of your work in the future.
Good one...