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Life Doodle Is Peace

By Additiya


Hymns engulfs our sad, yet bitter- sweet truths.

This truth doodles my mirror,

my reality,

my serenity of beliefs.

'Hope', this golden opportunity,

Keeps on sacrificing its desire, and

here I see, my enemy laughing at real pleasures.

My heart; Your heart; Our heart,

might make up this whole earth.

Well, it does my friend.

Together, it holds dear secrets;

Secrets, that are dear and dark.

Love took birth in this heart;

A thousand years ago, yet

love became reason, for unseen boundaries to grow apart.



My life; Your life; Our life,

it doodles in that past; Yet

never is able to finish its search for peace.

My thoughts; Your thinking; Our feelings,

clears, yet destroys so many homes.

'Who are we?'- Might be our last question,

to this sad, engulfing and bitter- sweet truth of dark desires.

We all hail in fear, in curiosity;

And we all fear in desperation.

So, what is this pride about, when we don't deserve anything?

My face; Your skin; Our body,

touch it, while you still realize faith,

that it carries same beat, same red wine and,

same power to breathe.

My flower; Your garland; Our wish lanterns,

goes to same death bed and same after life;

Which once had similar life.

My concerns are half way, while your prayers may reach;

'What is my, your and our life?' This doodle comes back in only way;

That, peace prevails and peace is the hope;

Our life doodle take us to.


By Additiya




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Jun 24, 2023
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May 19, 2023
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May 19, 2023
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May 18, 2023
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