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The Eldest Child

By Aditi Penumathca

I am the eldest child

And I have not been a kid

Since I was three years old


A brother was born, and I was told

That I now have responsibility

But I was just a child

And that nobody could see


“You cannot make mistakes” they said

For the younger ones would follow

“You have to be the best” they said

And I was left cold and hollow

A shell of my former self


She loved the world she had

That three-year-old child

She lived and laughed to no end

But soon all of that came to an end


For she was another reason for me

To show exactly what to be

A reason to be better, to do better

“And what if I fail?” I foolishly asked


“You can be married off then” they said

“For you are the daughter of the house

If you have no strive for success instead”

It was either a pawn or the queen

For me there was no in-between 


A sister was born later

And I was happy as could be

But that happiness soon turned

Into unbearable melancholy


“You have to do better” they said to me

Not once a “good job!” or “it’s okay to fail”

But never held back from saying things

Like “how could you act so poorly?”


They were right though

For my brother to do good I have to be better

But for him to do good, mustn’t he try harder?

I had to do better to show him how

How could I carry that burden

When I too was just a child?


Do I not deserve what my siblings have?

Do I not deserve to dream?

To believe for once that I could be

Anything that I’ve dreamed to see?


And now, after all these years I lay undead

But they are still inside my head

“You used to be so bright” they said

But why couldn’t they say that

I was bright before

Now that shell of a child

Lives inside me no more


Yes, I’ve lived undead for long

But that shell was more loved than me

I have no purpose to them if I can’t be

The best at everything that I did except

Living as a collectable on a shelf


And now I’m left here questioning

If this life is worth living

Both now and then, no one believed

That I could be a child with a bright future


To them I am the eldest child

I withhold my family honour

I am but a slave to that name I hold

A picture-perfect doll, and soon

A trophy wife to uphold


Nothing but a pretty face and smile

No one ever asked me what was on my mind

I was a doll but then I cracked

When they couldn’t paint it, they threw me out


By Aditi Penumathca


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