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When You Told Me, You No Longer Loved Me

By Bhavika Dudani

I don’t happen to be satisfied All I want to do is write, About the mole on your chest, And the rheumy eyes, When you finally told me you no longer loved me, I wanted to grab my diary and describe, How much that grief choked my breath, And those hungry red chambers in my chest, wanted to be fed; I afflicted so tightly despite the fact, My palms were bruised and sore, And pretending we were okay wasn’t any longer an act.

Petite hands over your face, I kissed you hastily, That while your lips tasted like betrayal, And you no longer smelled like my favourite cologne, Your touch seemed like a stranger to me, And I laid in your arms, but our fingers didn’t intertwine; I looked on it in bitter disbelief, As love evacuated out of your heart, I knew, It was the moment to unbind myself from you, And to liberate my body, to release two souls; It was the time to unleash the promise of forever, I knew, It was the moment I had to let you go.

By Bhavika Dudani


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Barkha Ahuja
Barkha Ahuja
May 24, 2023
Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

Beautifully written💖

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Namrata Sharma
Namrata Sharma
May 22, 2023

Amazing 😍

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Mamtu Advani
Mamtu Advani
May 22, 2023
Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

Absolutely melodic!! the emotion and intentions has outreached well!! Lovely Bhavika!!

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karan kukreja
karan kukreja
May 21, 2023
Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

Such a beautiful piece to read...loved it.

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LAVINA KATARIA
LAVINA KATARIA
May 21, 2023
Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

It's simply alluring❤️

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