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Written In Earnest

By Swati Mohana Krishnan


Yesterday I removed a corpse from my ear.


It was fully preserved; every limb was intact and a scientist would have declared it a marvelous specimen.


The colors were still bold, the eyes wide open and if I were to trick my mind, I'd still be able to hear it breathe.


It had experienced no mutilation, no violence in death and had entered my ear, alive, of its own accord.


Had it gotten lost in the noises of my ear drum? Had it failed to hear the ominous beats of its own funeral drum?


Had it perhaps been overwhelmed by the echo chamber of my ear where receptivity and resistance were locked in a bitter stalemate?


There was no sign outside my ear that said 'trespassers shall be prosecuted' or the simpler American variant, 'no entry'. Does this excuse it's curiosity?


Perhaps it was an adventurer, a traveler on a quest, who had taken an oath to map unconquered realms?



However, no one had prepared it for the nothingness in my ear. Had the void within me frightened the soul out of her? Or did the darkness within me consume the light of her life?


Did she perhaps hear a fatal secret which echoed and amplified in her being as she strove to escape the hidden realms in my ear? Or did the dirge of my nightmares petrify the wits out of her?


I will never know for the dead do not speak in a language that I understand.


When I removed her from my ear, she was carefully preserved in a light, invisible coating of ear wax.


Her wings were intact, her legs frozen in a final jump, she was laid flat on the tip of a white, cotton ear bud.


Poor little fly, why did you fly into me and lose yourself in me?


By Swati Mohana Krishnan




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Chitresh Kapoor
Chitresh Kapoor
Jun 30, 2023
Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

Such an amazing poem. The most important part that I felt it had was humanity which is a lost treasure these days. Good job done Swati :-)

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Swati M. Krishnan
Swati M. Krishnan
Jun 30, 2023
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Thanks Chitresh! You were one of the first people to read and appreciate this poem and give me honest feedback on it. Your unwavering faith in me has emboldened me to go public with my writing and seek platforms like Hashtag Kalakar which promote original writing. Thanks for being the best stand up comedian I know and the wind beneath my wings.

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Ravi Mahto
Ravi Mahto
Jun 30, 2023
Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

Thanks for the lovely poem Swati. It is deep and thought provoking. Worth reading!! ☺️

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Swati M. Krishnan
Swati M. Krishnan
Jun 30, 2023
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Thank you Ravi. your feedback is always valued!

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Abhishek Balayan
Abhishek Balayan
Jun 30, 2023
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Beautiful ❤️

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Swati M. Krishnan
Swati M. Krishnan
Jun 30, 2023
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Glad you liked it!

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Anushruti Pandey
Anushruti Pandey
Jun 29, 2023
Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

Hauntingly beautiful and how very captivating! Not many could explore the idea of death and the associated anomalies this way..

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Swati M. Krishnan
Swati M. Krishnan
Jun 30, 2023
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Thank you so much! This is such a generous and heartfelt comment!

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Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

This is a profound and thought-provoking poem. The ideas of nothingness within, of boundaries between creatures that 'lose themselves' in another and yet remain 'intact' and whole are powerful and are expressed with deep understanding and clarity.

There is laughter and compassion, as well as a strong sense of humanity.

I love the way the main line of thought is pursued through the poem with logic and consistency.

Delighted with the "Ear-nest" of the title!

Brava!


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Swati M. Krishnan
Swati M. Krishnan
Jun 30, 2023
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Thank you for spotting the pun in the title! You've read it very 'ear-nestly'!

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